Something in our life lingers forever. We never forget those things. That tweaks us every moment.
Here is a story about two guiltless lovers, who had loved each other more than ever, but in every case they wrestled with the luck, time and last but not the least state of affairs. And finally did fail. So let’s see how their love was.
Raheel Pattnaik a 25 year old guy, who is the main character of the story. He was from the temple city of Orissa that is Bhubaneswar. He was juvenile, energetic.
After completion of M.sc in electronics, he got a job in NTL electronics, Noida. So after conforming about this he came without any second thought to his dream city..
Delhi was his dream place from childhood.so with lots of excitement he did decide to go for that job after conferring with the company. Within due date he put his step on his dream place. From starting he became excited. He decided to live in Noida. So first he went to his friend’s room. Then he informed the company about his arrival, and started to search a house for him. By the help of a friend he got a contact of a house. Then he went as per the address and that was
B/98, sector-20, NOIDA
He rang the bell of that house.
After sometime a middle aged man came and asked him
What happened?
Good evening sir, I am raheel Pattnaik, I want your house for rent, can i?
Actually I need a house to live and luckily got your house vacant. So came here to ask you about this.
Oohhh…….
Come inside
Have a seat.
Thank you sir.
So where are you from?
I am from Bhubaneswar,Orissa.
Ok. What are you doing?
I have got a job in NTL electronics.
Ok
So how much salary you will get?
Around 18,000 sir.
Are you married?
Not yet sir.
What do you like to take?
Nothing except your home sir.
Haahaa…..
Ok Mr.Raheeel I will give my house as rent to you, but I have few restrictions. So if you will like and accept those things then from my side it will be ok.
Restrictions!!!
Yaa..
* An advance of 15,000
*You have to give 4500/- rent per month
*Electricity and water bill extra
*Wastage of water and electricity strictly prohibited
*Alcohol is banned
*Do not do any nuisance; you have to understand its meaning
*Do not do night parties
You can smoke if you want to but not in the balcony. Do inside your room, but keep the room clean
I am a retired colonel, so I have strict rules. If the conditions are acceptable for you then say yes otherwise see your way.
Raheel thought for a while. (Just say yes yaar now then we’ll see his mind told him like this)
Then he said:
No sir I have not any problem with your conditions.
Then the upstairs is yours. Come with your require things tomorrow and enjoy.
Thank you Sir.
Actually that house was very nearer to his company.so without any second thought he agreed and came to his new room with all his attires.
That room was quite good. It has one big hall, a kitchen, an attached bathroom and at last a balcony.
Then from the very next day his professional life at NTL Electronics started. He went there in time. He showed his offer letter to the HR department and did collect the joining letter. Then met with his PM and took his seat.in this fashion his life in NTL electronics went on. Life was going on smoothly.
It was a cool evening. Raheel was coming from his office. He was nearer to his room. Suddenly his eyes fell on some children, who were playing in front of his room’s gate. All of a sudden his eyes fell on someone in between those children, and that was beyond his imagination. An angel was playing with those kids. That was a girl, who was out of the ordinary ones for him. He had not seen such a beauty before. He went closer and saw her closely. He thought she must be around 21 years. Her dazzling eyes, alluring smile, grace and elegance of her steps, sparkle of waist length hair and an eye-catching face made Raheel thunderstruck. The beauty of her captured his soul. After some time that girl came and said:
Hello! Mr. what took place?
Why are you eyeing me like this?
Do you have any problem?
Hello!!!
At last Raheel came to his present situation.
Oohhh…. What happened?
What materialized to you? And why are you pausing here?(Anchal said)
Oohhh... Actually I want to go upstairs to my room, but you were playing in front of the gate. So I am standing here.(Raheel)
So would you mind to help me to go upstairs?
Hmm… you can.(Anchal)
You are the new one in our house Na.
Anyway what about the room? Is that ok?
Yaa… enormously good.(Raheel)
Raheel was gazing her surprisingly.
Then she said Oohhh... Sorry I have not introduced myself.
Myself anchal choudhry. I am your house owner’s only daughter.
Ooh…. I am Raheel Pattnaik.
So you are working in NTL Electronics?(Anchal)
Hmm…(Raheel)
What about you?
I am doing masters in International business management at amity.(Anchal)
Good.(Raheel)
Ok I am going. Byeee(Anchal)
Bye(Raheel)
Then they went to their respective home. Raheel came to balcony after refreshing. Something was disturbing him. Something was happening inside his heart. Conversation with the girl was coming in front of him. That night passed in same fashion. After that day they talked accidently. In the same fashion two months went. At that time raheel thought more and more about her. He was willing to talk with her every time. He was dreaming about her only. Actually she had made raheel crazy.
In the between he thought:
What has happened to me?
Why such things are coming in my mind?
Why I am feeling different?
Why my heart is missing something?
At last his inner part of body made him feel that he is in love.
So am I in love?
Is this thing called love or anything else?
Ok let me see.
After that day raheel thought about his love more and more. But he was not fully confident.
But actually he had fallen in love with Anchal.
In the meantime another incident happened.
It was an off day of raheel. He was roaming in the balcony. Suddenly he saw anchal in her garden. So swiftly he came down and said:
Hiiiii……..
What are you doing here?(Raheel)
Nothing, just passing some time.(Anchal)
And what about you?
You are here, at this time!
Is it your off today?
Yaaa….(Raheel uttered)
So anything special plan for today?(Anchal)
Naaa… nothing special.(Raheel)
Ok.(Anchal)
Can I ask you something?
Ya you can.(Raheel)
Has something wrong happened with you?(Anchal did Investigate)
You are looking disturbed.
You have not the normal activities and behavior.
Any problem?
Hmm. Nothing…..(Raheel)
I know something has happened with you. Tell me, who knows, I can solve your problem(Anchal)
Actually… anchal don’t be angry. Don’t get hurt. If you don’t like this then forget all my words as a night dream.(Raheel)
Ok just tell me.(Anchal)
Seriously anchal, something wrong has happened with me. I am not behaving normal. My heart is craving for something or I can say someone.(Raheel told innocently)
Whatttt!!!!!!(Anchal gave a surprised look)
What are you saying?
These things are out of my mind.
Tell me in a simple manner.
Ok, just tell me…..(Raheel)
What do you think about me?
Whyyyyy?(Anchal questioned him)
Just tell.(Raheel)
Hmmmm…. I think, a nice guy, perfectly mannered, Handsome. And in a single line: every mother’s desired guy, and last but not the least a fool.(Anchal)
Whhaatt?(Raheel)
Hmmmm (smiling)(Anchal)
So is your mother included in every mother’s category?(Raheel)
Hmmm… she should be.(Anchal said)
Ok Mr. serious let me go inside, otherwise anything wrong can happen.
Then she went inside. Raheel was standing there. He became dumb. He was thinking her words. Then suddenly he went inside anchal’s home.
Anchal was in her hall with her mother. Raheel entered and said:
Hi aunty! How are you?
Oohhh... Hi I am fine, what about you?
(Anchal’s facial expression was too different)
Same aunty.
Anyway what happened?
Nothing special aunty. I have come to see the score. How much Tendulkar scored?
I don’t know. You see. I have lots of work to do.
You sit there and see the match.
Anchal! Give him the remote.
Ok mamma.
Then she went inside.
At this time raheel thought this is the right time to confess his feelings. So without wasting anytime he jumped toward her and by dragging a flower from the vase bent in front of her and said:
I am in love and my love is not ordinary but special.
I think you are more than me for me.
Your smile and ways you put things into passion impressed me.
Your beauty made me aware that one of the doll has escaped from my sister’s cupboard.
You are not everything, but something special to me.
I love you anchal. I want to marry you.
So will you……
Anchal became speechless. Some amazing things were happening in front of her. It was like a dream. Truly she was adoring raheel. But things were happening rapidly, so that made her amaze. Tear came down from her eyes and with those tears only she accepted the flower from his hand and said:
Yaa my fool boy I love you.
I love you more than ever.
Then Raheel went upstairs. Things were going straightforwardly for him. He got approval from anchal. So his glee had no perimeter. In the same time his project in the company was going nonchalantly. So he was in the cloud nine. After that day they passed times in their accessible times. The purana quilla, the Sarojini Park, garden near India gate got their foot prints.
But all we know happiness does not remain forever. We have to accept the negative part also. After the three months of enjoyment, their love story fell in the ear of col. Choudhry. It was heart-throbbing for him. It was against his principles. He became angry, and abruptly called Anchal.
And said:
You are doing some twaddle things.
Are you cognizant about that?
I had not anticipated these things from you.
You have cleaned out my reliance.
What came about papa? (Anchal)
What are you voicing?
What’s the role of Raheel in your life?
Paaaa….pa! (Anchal)
Just tell me! (Cl Choudhry)
Hmmm….. I… have a weakness for him papa! I lllllllllllllllloveeee him.
Anchal!!! Are you whacky?
Ya mamma I love Raheel.
Col. Choudhry could not control himself, and anchal’s chin accepted a hard slap from him.
Paaapaa….
Have faith in me I love him and he loves me too.
You just go to your room. I will talk with you later.
Then immediately he called Raheel and asked:
So what happened young man?
What sir? What happened?
Don’t try to be innocent.
You have kicked off my conditions.
No sir, I’m not.
Hmmmm.
Just tell me about your misdoing.
Sirrrr….
Just teeeel me.
Ok.
I love anchal, and I want to marry her.
Please don’t take this in other way.
Mr. Raheel be in your limit!
I am revealing truth sir.
I had cautioned you with some conditions. But you violated those.
So you can’t live in my house, just get out from here now only.
Sir please listens to me first.
I love her sir. I will marry her and will keep her ever happy.
Just give me a chance.
Sorry young man you are day-dreaming.
I have big ambitions for my only daughter. You are not able for her.
So just get out from here and stay away from her forever.
Suddenly anchal came and told:
Papa please don’t do that. I really love him. He is a nice guy. I can live happily with him. He is my only happiness. Please! Papa do believe me.
Mr. Raheel Pattnaik just gets out from my house.
Sir please give me one chance to prove myself. If I won’t be able to prove then I will go from here forever.
Hmmm. Are you sure?
Yes Sir.
Ok then listen.
I have big ambitions for her.
She has brought up with high level of facilities.
She is going to UK after four months for higher study.
So I think with you those things can’t be fulfilled.
Her life and her way of living is much different from you.
So forget her, and live your life.
I know sir; she is your only daughter. So you have big dreams for her.
It’s good to allow her to go abroad for higher study.
But believe me sir, though I may not be able to give her all the facilities like you, but I can try and keep her happy always.
Hmmm… I don’t think so…………..
Ok I have one condition. If you will be able to do that, then she will be yours.
Listen to me seriously! With your current salary, it is impossible for her to live with you. To keep her with you, you need to earn more. And not only that you have to raise your standard.
So just try for a better job with handsome salary and then think about her.
Are you get along with this?
Raheel thought for a while and then said:
Ya sir I can do this. Just give me some time.
Ok I have no problem. Take two months’ time. But not more than that.
Ok sir.
Then Raheel came to his room. He was then half satisfied. He sat and started to think:
What will I do?
How can I get a job with higher salary within two months?
I have joined recently, so how can I get that?
I have promised Col. Choudhry.
And the important thing is I love Anchal. And that is not bogus.
So at any cost I have to fulfill the necessity of Cl. Choudhry.
But how?????
Bank of question were playing inside his mind.
Suddenly Anchal came to him and told:
Raheel what are you doing?
Are you imprudent?
Why did you agree to take papa’s condition?
I had not any other chance dear.
To get you I did accept that.
And don’t lose sleep, Things will be alright soon.
Don’t be frivolous Raheel! I know it is impossible.
And it will hurt you. So I don’t want you to do this.
Then Raheel came closer to Anchal and held her in his arms and said:
My cutie pie, you are my princess. So to get a princess the arduous work is needed. God doesn’t want to give you to me with ease. So this is a test for me.
So my dear let me do this. And don’t think much about it. Go and sleep.
At last she left that place with lots of ambiguity.
Anchal where were you?
Hmm….
Tell me!
I had gone to talk with Raheel.
I had warned you to avoid him.
Papa! You have put a hard challenge before him. And that is impossible.
But he agreed for that dear.
He did that for me only.
Then let him do that.
But papa…
See Anchal, I am your father.
I have seen lots of dream for you.
I can’t let my daughter to go with anybody.
Let me see how he is.
I want to test him.
At last she left that place without further argument.
In this fashion days went on. No contact, no talking just made them mad. Only the way was eye contact. And that was also happening rarely. Cl. Choudhry and his wife were keeping a strict eye on this. So things were very hard. In between these the mental pressure and illness made anchal weak. On the other hand Raheel was doing his job but in a slapdash fashion. The project, meeting with project manager and MD were not going in favor of him. The company did put a committee against him. They forewarned him. Then he did accept his misdoing and prepared for the right way. He gave concentration in his work. Within a few days he succeeded to get his PM’s belief on him. But anchal’s absence was hitting him.
In this way 20 days went. Raheel was trying hard to get a good job with handsome salary. His present salary was 18,000. He had to raise his salary level to get anchal. But nobody helped him in this, neither any company nor the luck. He botched in every place. At that stage he felt something panicky, and lone.
He thought: I have only 40 days left.
Nothing is going in favor of me.
TRIDENT INFOSOL has asked me to wait for 3 months.
But I have not that much of time.
What will happen?
What will I do?
Hey gods please help me.
I have become feeble, please do something for me.
He thought more and more, at last his mind advised him to try for any BPO. He went for that and got job without any obstacle due to his talent. He got selected for the post of tech support engineer. He was asked to work in the night shift, from 10pm to 6am. It was good for him. His time in NTL Electronics was from 10 am to 5 pm. So he accepted that. And the new company agreed to give him a salary of 14,000 per month. At that time he thought I have no other option right now, so I will join here temporarily till I will get a call from TRIDENT INFOSOL. In the end he filled all the requirements of the company, and accepted the offer letter from them. At last he got something. He was eager to tell this to Anchal, but was helpless. Cl. Choudhry had become strict with her. He was not allowing her to meet or talk with him.
Still he was happy as he positively came in favor of the challenge. After that his new life started. He was happy. He was doing two jobs in a day. He started to work from 10 am to 5 pm. Then again from 10 pm to 6 am. In this fashion life was going on. But actually the routine was very thought-provoking. Within a week of time it did affect not only his regular job but also health. Again he put a negative mark against him in front of his PM.
He inquired Raheel about this. But he easily avoided that. Raheel was trying hard to do well in both of his job. And he had that much talent and power. But we know everybody fall short in some aspect. So this happened with him. In this way 38 days went. There only 22 days had left. Still with all the intricacy, ill health and hard luck he was happy. He was thinking: after 22 days I will get a salary of 32,000. I will show Cl.Chaudhry. I will show him what I did!
I will make anchal happy. And then she will be mine.
He was trying to give more and more focus on both of his job. He was trying to get his boss’s full belief on him. Count down had been started for him. Good days were coming for him. Only six days were left.
It was an overcast morning. Raheel entered in his company, went to his cabin and logged on his system. He started to do his balance work. Suddenly his GM called him to his cabin. So he went inside his room.
May I come in sir?
Ya raheel come in.
Good morning sir.
Ya good morning.
Sit
Thank you sir.
Hmmm. Mr. Pattnaik what has cropped upwith you?
I listened that you are not focusing fully in your work.
No sir, not like that.
I had some health problem. That’s why.
Is that Health problem or anything else?
No sir, nothing else.
Mr. pattnaik If you will work in two companies at a time, in a day then health problem will occur surely.
Sir!!!!!!!!
Ya Mr.pattnaik Company have known about you.
I had thought you a genuine and trustworthy guy. Your performance was awe-inspiring except last two months. And one thing in this month you could get the elite employ award. You had a bright future with this company. But you only tumbled down all in your hands.
So with a heavy heart I am saying that you are axed raheel, you are axed from our company.
This is your dismiss letter. Go to the account section, and take your payable amount and get out from the company.
Thanks and best of luck for the rest of life.
Sir please heed to me.
You can go now; I have lots of work to do.
Please sir listens to me once.
I will spell out you all about this.
It is too tardy raheel.
I don’t have anything in my hand. This decision from the upper level.
So don’t envisage anything from me.
Goodbye.
Ooook sir. Thank youuu………….
Then without telling a word he came out from that place. The outside world looked like a hell to him. He couldn’t believe the happenings. He was thinking only. Lots of questions were playing inside his mind.Quivering attracted him, till he reached at home. He went to the terrace and sat there. Then with a heavy hearted mind he dragged a cigarette and by lighting that started to smoke. In the mean while anchal came from home. He was looking for raheel. Suddenly her eyes fell on him. Without thinking she just came to him. When she saw him smoking she came to knew that something wrong has happened. He could not anticipate the situation. He could not believe her eyes. She had not seen him for last two months closely. He was looking like a poverty-stricken fellow. As well as with a heavy hearted mind. Then she asked:
What happened raheel?
What made you to smoke at this time?
Raheel did not utter a single world.
He just came closely towards her and did hug her and started sobbing.
And this thing was very much different for anchal.
Raheel what happened? Tell me naaa……..
Finally he told her the entire story about his two jobs, what problem he faced and how his boss fired him.
Anchal I did fail.
I lost my job.
I was very happy. I was thinking that after six days I will get a salary of 32,000 thousand and will show that to your papa. And will prove myself.
Then after that nobody can part us.
Butt………….
I failed dear.
I think I will lose you dear.
I can’t live without you anchal! I can’t.
But I am a useless.
I could not keep my word.
Please forgive me anchal. Believe me I am not a looser but the luck did not give any support.
What would I do?
Nooo raheel don’t say like this.
Every time you were saying me to be practical always. But now you are doing against that.
Please don’t think like this.
It’s the luck. So we have to accept that.
I know you raheel. I know what you can do.
So my Cuddle Cakes is not an useless. One day he will be a bright spark.
And I know what you can do for me.
So you will not fail ever.
You have done some out of the ordinary things for me.
And this is a dream for everyone except you.
Even I can bet that no one can do things for love like you.
You are marvelous.
So leave these things, and lets go somewhere for refreshing. Shall we go for a drive in greater Noida express highway? Or go to paranthe wali gali to taste your favorite paranthe.
Tell me Naaa…….. Where we will go?
I want to refresh your mind.
Or we can go to India gate for a cool breeze.
Don’t think much my cute boy, everything will be fine.
So let’s go to somewhere, after that I will talk with papa about this.
Then she took raheel to greaternoida express high way to relax his mind.
Then after assuring raheel she came to home, and called her father and said:
Papa I want to talk with you.
Ok tell me.
Papa something wrong has happened.
Raheel’s company fired him from his job.
Whaaattt!
Ya papa.
I had known that. He deserved that. I was telling you he is not a guy for you.
But you did not listen. Now see what happened.
No papa thing is not like that, first listen to me.
Don’t favor him anchal.
Papa!
For the sake of the promise to you, he tried hard to get much salary. But he did fail everywhere. To satisfy you and for me, at last he did decide to work in a Bpo in night shift. He started to work at NTL in day time and in the Bpo in night. And you know papa this is very hard, but he did that. And this is for me only. Still things were going in the right way and smoothly. But papa, the luck did not help him. NTL electronics knew about his doings and without listening anything they fired him.
So tell papa, what was his fault? Had not he tried? Had not he worked hard? Without thinking about himself he did something extra ordinary for me only.
So he is really extra special. So accept him papa. Accept him for me please. I can live happily with him.
I do not need money papa; I want raheel and his love. So please understand papa, please.
Anchal! I have big dreams for you. And those things cannot be fulfilled with him. He is just an useless.
You are thinking wrong papa! He is not like this. And one thing put your all efforts and all the money you have, but you cannot get a guy like Raheel.
Anchal!!!!
Ya papa I am right.
Papa! I know you don’t like him. So you are doing and playing ridiculously with some promises with him. And that poor fellow is following those. He admires you a lot papa. That is why he is doing all the stuffs.
Now listen one thing carefully papa! If I won’t get raheel then I won’t keep myself alive.
Anchal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is he greater than your parents?
Is he more than us for you?
Not like that papa.
Then…………….
Papa, I know how much you love me, but his love is precious in his way.
Still my decision is final, just stay away from him.
Sooory papa.
AAAAAAAnchal!!!!!!!!!!
Papa, keep a side your esteem and just see the happiness of your daughter, then you will know what is right.
Papa I know you want to keep your daughter away from him, as he is earning low, he is not a career 1st class student, not an IITIAN. So you had planned those promises. You had thought that he can’t fulfill your requirement. But he somehow did that.You were almost right papa, but not fully. Remember one thing this is impossible for everyone except Raheel.
Just the luck did not support him.
But you have cheated raheel.
So I won’t obey your orders.
Ohhh… my daughter has grown-up.
She has more knowledge than me.
I used to teach her by holding her hands. But today she is teaching and arguing with me.
Really the insect of love makes the children crazy.
For that ridiculous thing only they don’t even think about their parents.
Is love bigger than parents?
Can somebody love you more than your mother?
Can somebody take care of you more than your father?
No papa no one can!
But love sometimes makes you feel that everything is smaller than it. No one is around you except your love. And another thing papa when you have to move towards your destination then you have to choose the right path by leaving all the other things. In that way you have to forget all stuffs.
First I did not want to do like this, but now I have to. Otherwise the word love will lose its eminence papa!
I love you and mama much. But papa, raheel’s love for me is exceptional. I am sorry papa it may not be tolerable for you. Still in my view I am right papa. You have cheated and mocked my love. So this is the time to give my love fully respect and honor.
I don’t know papa why did you do like this.
It was your thinking. And maybe you are right, maybe I am wrong.
Still I will go with my love.
Anchal’s each word did thrill Cl. Chaudhry. Some panic made a nest in him. So he asked his wife to keep eye on anchal. But all we know no one can stop somebody who is seriously in love. The thing love can make you climb thousands of Everest. At last Anchal thought a lot for two days. Then she did decide to go to Raheel. It was a cool rainy night, she called him and said:
Raheel I want to meet you. I am coming upstairs.
What! Are you nuts!
No I am crazy, crazy for you.
We will meet tomorrow dear.
No I want to meet you now.
I am coming.
Then abruptly she cut the call and came to upstairs.
Raheel became astonished.
What happened anchal? What made you to come here so late?
Anything wrong? Is everything alright?
She ran towards raheel and hugged him tightly.
And said:
stop questioning you fool.
Let me with you for some time.
Ok.
But what about your father?
Do not think about him, he is sleeping right now.
I had a quarreled with him day before yesterday.
I tried hard to make understand him. But he did not listen. He asked me to stop thinking about you again.
But I came without listening to him to meet you.
I want you raheel, so I disobeyed him.
But anchal!!!!
Stop thinking about him raheel. Why do you think about everyone except you always?
I have to say one thing to you.
What?
I want to be yours forever tonight.
Whhhhaaaaat!!!!!!!!!
Ya, please accept me dear.
Are you zany? Do you have any knowledge about your saying?
Ya completely, my sweet boy.
I am not a child. I am not taking baby food in my breakfast. I am a lass. I am 21 years old and you are almost 24. And I think you are perfect in every aspect. Don’t you? Similarly I am also perfect with no limitations. And last but not the least thing is the government of India requires this much things only from a boy and girl to be a couple. Is not it?
I have this much knowledge only.
Raheel started to laugh at anchal’s words.
Then said: ya my cutie pie this is not only ok. This is alright.
Sooo….
Sooooooo………………
Then he strongly hugged her and hauled her velvety lips towards him with his lips. The lips locked like two opposite pole magnets first. Then those things gone into war. They did share the romantic saliva with each other. At that time raheel was resting on a wall and anchal was on him. In the meantime situation became wild. They rested in the bed. They had become crazy, crazy for each other, and crazy for love. They were in cloud nine and enjoying the sudden excitement and turn in the life. They might be in a stage of utopia.in the very moment anchal lifted her lips and rubbed against raheel’s chin. It made them look into each other’s eyes. Again their saliva of mouth coalesced and the tongues set forth for a pleasure duel.. They were too busy with each other still were speechless.
The knives of passion sliced their senses into lot of pieces. Suddenly raheel’s hand started exploring anchal’s body. In this fashion they opened all their private desires in that moment. Suddenly there occurred a sudden silence and they could hear them breathe heavily. After that raheel sat in the bed and anchal was in his lap. He was playing with her silky hairs. In that very moment he uttered:
Anchal we might have done something wrong.
You fool don’t think like that, and don’t behave like a child.
And another thing have not you ever thought for this?
So leave this.
Anchal can’t we be together?
Yaaaa we became naa, just a little while ago.
Be serious anchal.
I want to marry you, want to love you forever.
Yaaa I also want that.
All the things were going in our favor, but my bad luck washed all the things. F$$k my luck and f$$k me.
Don’t say like this raheel.
The luck plays a vital role in our life. It is an unknown and unpredictable phenomenon that causes an event to result in a way rather than other. So we have to accept this.
Yes I know that, but I have accepted that everytime.
But we can’t to against it naaa.
So my cute boy don’t think more, everything will be alright.
I want to marry you, and if this will happen then there is no one be happy more than me. But keep in your mind one thing: “marriage is not everything. It is a legal contract between two people. It is a process of mixing two people, culturally,legaly and sexually. We can marry legally with out my parent’s permission, but I know you won’t do that.
And raheel remember one thing always, whatever it will be in future, I am yours. Anchal is forever for you. Her every beat is for you. If something wrong will happen with me, then won’t think about me a lot. You have to concentrate in your life and work. I want you to go higher and higher. For me you have suffered much. So by leaving all the past things you will go on. For me you have became careless about your future.
Anchal…… stop.
What has happened with you? Why are you telling like this? Nothing will happen to you. I am with you. So don’t try to be a philosopher. Come and sleep.
Hmmmm……..
Then they went to sleep. But there was not a single sleep in anchal’s eye. She thought a lot about raheel, about their future, their love and last but not the least her parents.
It seemed her that they will fail in the commitement of love. A fear loosing each other hitted her inner part. Her father is not in a mood to listen her desire. Then she started to think about her future.
Papa will definitely send me abroad for higher study. He will force me with lots of emotion. But I can’t go by leaving raheel.
In the other hand I can’t break papa’s heart. Now I have come to the middle of a road. The veichles are coming towards me with a high speed. So I cant go straight. I have to go either side of the road. Two people are waiting for me in either side, papa and raheel. Towards whom I will go to save me from the coming catastrophe? I can’t leave raheel, in the same time I can’t deny papa’s call. Though I had some quarreled with papa, still he is my papa. He is the one who has brought me to this mortal world, has given me all my wantings. If I will refuse him then it will be a heart throb for him. On the other hand I cant even leave raheel. He is the one who has left his own life, career and everything for me only. Ohhh god what will I do. I cant go to the either sides of the road so will I go straight………….
Anchal was in a circle of puzzle. She came out from raheel’s room and went outside her house. It was around 3.30pm. She was thinking about her direction and suddenly a sound did stimulate
Dhruuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm……………………….
Some taxi driver said that the girl was walking in the middle of the road. We were about to drag her from the place a black Honda city smashed her beautiful body into small pieces.
After that Cl. Chaudhry was informed about the accident, as one of his friend some how managed to identify anchal. He and his wife hurriedly came to the place and saw the body of their loving daughter. Anchal’s mother brust into grief. But Cl.Chaudhry was standing like a statue. The posture he might had learn from the army training. Raheel got the news and without wasting a second came to the place. He did fall beside the body. He could not belive that was anchal.he did become dumb. He was quivering like a leaf in the wind. He brust into tears, yelled, but no one consoled him, no one did listen to him. In the mean time police came and investigated the heartbreaking incident. They took the body for the process of postmortem. They named it as an accident due to the idiocy of the victim. Still that time Cl.Chaudhry was in the same state of affirs. Raheel could not keep himself silent. He went to Cl.Chaudhry and uttered:
Sir, they named it as accident due to inanity of anchal.
But you know how clever your daughter was!!!
So is this true????
I think it is a suicide and someone might had forced her to do so……
But one thing I am admiring you sir!
You are very strong. You did not even bow infront of your daughter’s body.
You did not even shake by the dismissal of your daughter.
The Army might have taught you these things. Really you are the proud of army.
Thank you.
Then with a heavy heart raheel came to his home. He had become like a stone. He sat on the bed. Something touched his hand. He did discover that. At that was a white paper. He came to know that was a letter and written by his love and life Anchal. He did start to read…..
Heeeyyyy my curdle cakes, my sweet boy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I don’t know how you can read this. My papa once had told me that beta, we are the dolls of the almighty who directs us to play by his wishes in the stage of this fantasy world. Raheel, you are such an amazing guy. You are the most decent guy I have ever seen. You are the night dream for every other girl, and I was so lucky to have you. You know sometimes things doesn’t happen in our favor. The memory is still fresh in my mind, when we had seen each other for the first time. I was enjoying the evening with some children. You were returning to home from office. For the first time our eyes did match. Truly speaking I don’t know what was that, something passed through my heart. You gave me a slight smile. And you know I am crazy about your smile till this date. Gradually we became closer. And that sensation turned into love in some days with out my core knowledge. I had another incident as fresh, and that was when you did propose me. I was in my hall watching tv, you came and asked mamma about the score of tendulkar. And when she went inside suddenly you came to me with a handmade flower from the vase and proposed me. How romantic that was. I had not thought about the way of proposing in my wildest dream. How cute, how romantic that was!!!! That was beyond my imagination. Salute to your thinking and salute to your guts man!!! And another incident near the india gate. We were in our first outing. We were sitting in the bench in the park with a slight distance. We talked a lot. I was smiling at your cute sayings suddenly you brought your lips closer to mine and did plant a thunder kiss. What was that? Some hurricane did flow through my body.
My cute boy I had tried hard to make understand papa. But he did not listen. After failing from his side I did decide to meet you. I spent a lot of time with you yesterday night. Believe me dear I couldn’t figure out our future. Nobody were in favor of us, neither my parents nor your luck. We came closer last night for the first time. When we got closer you rendered me breathless. Our fingers interwined and your lips did press against mine. Everything about you took my breath away. Then you did something more,by which my mind went blank and as a computer reboots , it did start to dawn on me that some thing wonderful was happening. The intensity of the moment made us insane. We went blind. Our lips, tongues, hands and much more things went to war. I can’t explain more than this. After that you went to sleep. You were looking very innocent like a cute baby. I needed more time to spend with you. You don’t know how long I was there just staring you in the bed and in the door way. I wanted to run towards you. But with the last kiss with you I came from home, by passing all the night noise. I thought we can’t be together. Nobody will agree for our relation. Suddenly I thought it will be good to go away from your life.
Raheel you have faced a lot of trouble for me only. You have not thought about yourself,your career for once. With me your life has seen tremendous dilemma.i know raheel you will not accept my sayings. But truth is always truth.i know this letter is the last possible medium for me to talk with you. I have clearly understood that we can not be together. My papa will not accept our relation, and i can not escape from him to make alive my love. Whatever he may be, still he is my father. My misdoing might have ruined his prestige. So at last I did think to go away from your life. Raheel you know one great saying by samuel butler!! “ all animal except man know that the principal business of life is to enjoy it”. We human are really very different. We say that we are the best creation of almighty. But really we are very much down as compare to animals.so my cute boy don’t think much about me. I know when you will read this you will be angry with me. But my heart advised me this only dear. So dear, after this don’t waste your time thinking much about me. Don’t blem anybody for my misdoings. I have taken this decision with my all knowledge. My doing may be force someone to think about the past differently. I may prove my love infront of papa. So, I thought to prove this by my life.
Raheel always keep smiling, and live your life at the fullest. you may think that the stupid girl advising me after doing such bogus thing. But my dear these are request to you. I love you, I will be with you for ever.
Forget me as the darkest chapter of your life. I have given you only pain. Please start your life from a new point and fulfill all the dreams of you and your parents. Raheel don’t be insane by talking I have loved only one girl and I won’t marry anyone else. Just be in a good position and get the best girl as your life partner. Don’t cry for me atall. I will be there with you always.
Anyway love you my cuteboy, my baby.
Yours………..
aNcHaL
raheel became speechless. He could not imagine anchal.he was thinking numerous
things.
Is that the same girl, who was thinking life is bindass. We have to be practical on every aspect. How she did this. How could not I get a single glimpse about her thinking. The girl who was saying everything will be ok oneday, she only did select the path of suicide.
The girl who was scribbling romantic messages on her note book, who was drawing hearts on every possible places, who was praying for my happiness without any reason,only left me in the middle. Anchal’s dismisal made raheel to seem as some of his nerves and cells has been ruined. Was it true!!!! Was I awake!!!! He was thinking only.
At last like every other human being he started to scold the almighty.
Hey God!!!
From the starting of my life I have found that luck is a very peculiar thing. It can be renamed as hide and seek. Some one has said that luck is that, what happens when preparation meets opportunity. But I have prepared fully from my side still not for a single time it has met with opportunity. And another thing it luck has a peculiar habbit of favoring those who don’t depend on it. So I can’t estimate what actually luck is. Hey dude!!!! Can you explain me about this. I am broke dude! I have lost everything. I don’t want to live in your fantasy world.
But…………
I will live. I will live for my anchal. I will keep alive her feelings and love. And one thing to you mr. supreme power!!!! Don’t Try to make this type of luck for someone. if truth be told these things are very sore and ………….
It really aching.
Here is a story about two guiltless lovers, who had loved each other more than ever, but in every case they wrestled with the luck, time and last but not the least state of affairs. And finally did fail. So let’s see how their love was.
Raheel Pattnaik a 25 year old guy, who is the main character of the story. He was from the temple city of Orissa that is Bhubaneswar. He was juvenile, energetic.
After completion of M.sc in electronics, he got a job in NTL electronics, Noida. So after conforming about this he came without any second thought to his dream city..
Delhi was his dream place from childhood.so with lots of excitement he did decide to go for that job after conferring with the company. Within due date he put his step on his dream place. From starting he became excited. He decided to live in Noida. So first he went to his friend’s room. Then he informed the company about his arrival, and started to search a house for him. By the help of a friend he got a contact of a house. Then he went as per the address and that was
B/98, sector-20, NOIDA
He rang the bell of that house.
After sometime a middle aged man came and asked him
What happened?
Good evening sir, I am raheel Pattnaik, I want your house for rent, can i?
Actually I need a house to live and luckily got your house vacant. So came here to ask you about this.
Oohhh…….
Come inside
Have a seat.
Thank you sir.
So where are you from?
I am from Bhubaneswar,Orissa.
Ok. What are you doing?
I have got a job in NTL electronics.
Ok
So how much salary you will get?
Around 18,000 sir.
Are you married?
Not yet sir.
What do you like to take?
Nothing except your home sir.
Haahaa…..
Ok Mr.Raheeel I will give my house as rent to you, but I have few restrictions. So if you will like and accept those things then from my side it will be ok.
Restrictions!!!
Yaa..
* An advance of 15,000
*You have to give 4500/- rent per month
*Electricity and water bill extra
*Wastage of water and electricity strictly prohibited
*Alcohol is banned
*Do not do any nuisance; you have to understand its meaning
*Do not do night parties
You can smoke if you want to but not in the balcony. Do inside your room, but keep the room clean
I am a retired colonel, so I have strict rules. If the conditions are acceptable for you then say yes otherwise see your way.
Raheel thought for a while. (Just say yes yaar now then we’ll see his mind told him like this)
Then he said:
No sir I have not any problem with your conditions.
Then the upstairs is yours. Come with your require things tomorrow and enjoy.
Thank you Sir.
Actually that house was very nearer to his company.so without any second thought he agreed and came to his new room with all his attires.
That room was quite good. It has one big hall, a kitchen, an attached bathroom and at last a balcony.
Then from the very next day his professional life at NTL Electronics started. He went there in time. He showed his offer letter to the HR department and did collect the joining letter. Then met with his PM and took his seat.in this fashion his life in NTL electronics went on. Life was going on smoothly.
It was a cool evening. Raheel was coming from his office. He was nearer to his room. Suddenly his eyes fell on some children, who were playing in front of his room’s gate. All of a sudden his eyes fell on someone in between those children, and that was beyond his imagination. An angel was playing with those kids. That was a girl, who was out of the ordinary ones for him. He had not seen such a beauty before. He went closer and saw her closely. He thought she must be around 21 years. Her dazzling eyes, alluring smile, grace and elegance of her steps, sparkle of waist length hair and an eye-catching face made Raheel thunderstruck. The beauty of her captured his soul. After some time that girl came and said:
Hello! Mr. what took place?
Why are you eyeing me like this?
Do you have any problem?
Hello!!!
At last Raheel came to his present situation.
Oohhh…. What happened?
What materialized to you? And why are you pausing here?(Anchal said)
Oohhh... Actually I want to go upstairs to my room, but you were playing in front of the gate. So I am standing here.(Raheel)
So would you mind to help me to go upstairs?
Hmm… you can.(Anchal)
You are the new one in our house Na.
Anyway what about the room? Is that ok?
Yaa… enormously good.(Raheel)
Raheel was gazing her surprisingly.
Then she said Oohhh... Sorry I have not introduced myself.
Myself anchal choudhry. I am your house owner’s only daughter.
Ooh…. I am Raheel Pattnaik.
So you are working in NTL Electronics?(Anchal)
Hmm…(Raheel)
What about you?
I am doing masters in International business management at amity.(Anchal)
Good.(Raheel)
Ok I am going. Byeee(Anchal)
Bye(Raheel)
Then they went to their respective home. Raheel came to balcony after refreshing. Something was disturbing him. Something was happening inside his heart. Conversation with the girl was coming in front of him. That night passed in same fashion. After that day they talked accidently. In the same fashion two months went. At that time raheel thought more and more about her. He was willing to talk with her every time. He was dreaming about her only. Actually she had made raheel crazy.
In the between he thought:
What has happened to me?
Why such things are coming in my mind?
Why I am feeling different?
Why my heart is missing something?
At last his inner part of body made him feel that he is in love.
So am I in love?
Is this thing called love or anything else?
Ok let me see.
After that day raheel thought about his love more and more. But he was not fully confident.
But actually he had fallen in love with Anchal.
In the meantime another incident happened.
It was an off day of raheel. He was roaming in the balcony. Suddenly he saw anchal in her garden. So swiftly he came down and said:
Hiiiii……..
What are you doing here?(Raheel)
Nothing, just passing some time.(Anchal)
And what about you?
You are here, at this time!
Is it your off today?
Yaaa….(Raheel uttered)
So anything special plan for today?(Anchal)
Naaa… nothing special.(Raheel)
Ok.(Anchal)
Can I ask you something?
Ya you can.(Raheel)
Has something wrong happened with you?(Anchal did Investigate)
You are looking disturbed.
You have not the normal activities and behavior.
Any problem?
Hmm. Nothing…..(Raheel)
I know something has happened with you. Tell me, who knows, I can solve your problem(Anchal)
Actually… anchal don’t be angry. Don’t get hurt. If you don’t like this then forget all my words as a night dream.(Raheel)
Ok just tell me.(Anchal)
Seriously anchal, something wrong has happened with me. I am not behaving normal. My heart is craving for something or I can say someone.(Raheel told innocently)
Whatttt!!!!!!(Anchal gave a surprised look)
What are you saying?
These things are out of my mind.
Tell me in a simple manner.
Ok, just tell me…..(Raheel)
What do you think about me?
Whyyyyy?(Anchal questioned him)
Just tell.(Raheel)
Hmmmm…. I think, a nice guy, perfectly mannered, Handsome. And in a single line: every mother’s desired guy, and last but not the least a fool.(Anchal)
Whhaatt?(Raheel)
Hmmmm (smiling)(Anchal)
So is your mother included in every mother’s category?(Raheel)
Hmmm… she should be.(Anchal said)
Ok Mr. serious let me go inside, otherwise anything wrong can happen.
Then she went inside. Raheel was standing there. He became dumb. He was thinking her words. Then suddenly he went inside anchal’s home.
Anchal was in her hall with her mother. Raheel entered and said:
Hi aunty! How are you?
Oohhh... Hi I am fine, what about you?
(Anchal’s facial expression was too different)
Same aunty.
Anyway what happened?
Nothing special aunty. I have come to see the score. How much Tendulkar scored?
I don’t know. You see. I have lots of work to do.
You sit there and see the match.
Anchal! Give him the remote.
Ok mamma.
Then she went inside.
At this time raheel thought this is the right time to confess his feelings. So without wasting anytime he jumped toward her and by dragging a flower from the vase bent in front of her and said:
I am in love and my love is not ordinary but special.
I think you are more than me for me.
Your smile and ways you put things into passion impressed me.
Your beauty made me aware that one of the doll has escaped from my sister’s cupboard.
You are not everything, but something special to me.
I love you anchal. I want to marry you.
So will you……
Anchal became speechless. Some amazing things were happening in front of her. It was like a dream. Truly she was adoring raheel. But things were happening rapidly, so that made her amaze. Tear came down from her eyes and with those tears only she accepted the flower from his hand and said:
Yaa my fool boy I love you.
I love you more than ever.
Then Raheel went upstairs. Things were going straightforwardly for him. He got approval from anchal. So his glee had no perimeter. In the same time his project in the company was going nonchalantly. So he was in the cloud nine. After that day they passed times in their accessible times. The purana quilla, the Sarojini Park, garden near India gate got their foot prints.
But all we know happiness does not remain forever. We have to accept the negative part also. After the three months of enjoyment, their love story fell in the ear of col. Choudhry. It was heart-throbbing for him. It was against his principles. He became angry, and abruptly called Anchal.
And said:
You are doing some twaddle things.
Are you cognizant about that?
I had not anticipated these things from you.
You have cleaned out my reliance.
What came about papa? (Anchal)
What are you voicing?
What’s the role of Raheel in your life?
Paaaa….pa! (Anchal)
Just tell me! (Cl Choudhry)
Hmmm….. I… have a weakness for him papa! I lllllllllllllllloveeee him.
Anchal!!! Are you whacky?
Ya mamma I love Raheel.
Col. Choudhry could not control himself, and anchal’s chin accepted a hard slap from him.
Paaapaa….
Have faith in me I love him and he loves me too.
You just go to your room. I will talk with you later.
Then immediately he called Raheel and asked:
So what happened young man?
What sir? What happened?
Don’t try to be innocent.
You have kicked off my conditions.
No sir, I’m not.
Hmmmm.
Just tell me about your misdoing.
Sirrrr….
Just teeeel me.
Ok.
I love anchal, and I want to marry her.
Please don’t take this in other way.
Mr. Raheel be in your limit!
I am revealing truth sir.
I had cautioned you with some conditions. But you violated those.
So you can’t live in my house, just get out from here now only.
Sir please listens to me first.
I love her sir. I will marry her and will keep her ever happy.
Just give me a chance.
Sorry young man you are day-dreaming.
I have big ambitions for my only daughter. You are not able for her.
So just get out from here and stay away from her forever.
Suddenly anchal came and told:
Papa please don’t do that. I really love him. He is a nice guy. I can live happily with him. He is my only happiness. Please! Papa do believe me.
Mr. Raheel Pattnaik just gets out from my house.
Sir please give me one chance to prove myself. If I won’t be able to prove then I will go from here forever.
Hmmm. Are you sure?
Yes Sir.
Ok then listen.
I have big ambitions for her.
She has brought up with high level of facilities.
She is going to UK after four months for higher study.
So I think with you those things can’t be fulfilled.
Her life and her way of living is much different from you.
So forget her, and live your life.
I know sir; she is your only daughter. So you have big dreams for her.
It’s good to allow her to go abroad for higher study.
But believe me sir, though I may not be able to give her all the facilities like you, but I can try and keep her happy always.
Hmmm… I don’t think so…………..
Ok I have one condition. If you will be able to do that, then she will be yours.
Listen to me seriously! With your current salary, it is impossible for her to live with you. To keep her with you, you need to earn more. And not only that you have to raise your standard.
So just try for a better job with handsome salary and then think about her.
Are you get along with this?
Raheel thought for a while and then said:
Ya sir I can do this. Just give me some time.
Ok I have no problem. Take two months’ time. But not more than that.
Ok sir.
Then Raheel came to his room. He was then half satisfied. He sat and started to think:
What will I do?
How can I get a job with higher salary within two months?
I have joined recently, so how can I get that?
I have promised Col. Choudhry.
And the important thing is I love Anchal. And that is not bogus.
So at any cost I have to fulfill the necessity of Cl. Choudhry.
But how?????
Bank of question were playing inside his mind.
Suddenly Anchal came to him and told:
Raheel what are you doing?
Are you imprudent?
Why did you agree to take papa’s condition?
I had not any other chance dear.
To get you I did accept that.
And don’t lose sleep, Things will be alright soon.
Don’t be frivolous Raheel! I know it is impossible.
And it will hurt you. So I don’t want you to do this.
Then Raheel came closer to Anchal and held her in his arms and said:
My cutie pie, you are my princess. So to get a princess the arduous work is needed. God doesn’t want to give you to me with ease. So this is a test for me.
So my dear let me do this. And don’t think much about it. Go and sleep.
At last she left that place with lots of ambiguity.
Anchal where were you?
Hmm….
Tell me!
I had gone to talk with Raheel.
I had warned you to avoid him.
Papa! You have put a hard challenge before him. And that is impossible.
But he agreed for that dear.
He did that for me only.
Then let him do that.
But papa…
See Anchal, I am your father.
I have seen lots of dream for you.
I can’t let my daughter to go with anybody.
Let me see how he is.
I want to test him.
At last she left that place without further argument.
In this fashion days went on. No contact, no talking just made them mad. Only the way was eye contact. And that was also happening rarely. Cl. Choudhry and his wife were keeping a strict eye on this. So things were very hard. In between these the mental pressure and illness made anchal weak. On the other hand Raheel was doing his job but in a slapdash fashion. The project, meeting with project manager and MD were not going in favor of him. The company did put a committee against him. They forewarned him. Then he did accept his misdoing and prepared for the right way. He gave concentration in his work. Within a few days he succeeded to get his PM’s belief on him. But anchal’s absence was hitting him.
In this way 20 days went. Raheel was trying hard to get a good job with handsome salary. His present salary was 18,000. He had to raise his salary level to get anchal. But nobody helped him in this, neither any company nor the luck. He botched in every place. At that stage he felt something panicky, and lone.
He thought: I have only 40 days left.
Nothing is going in favor of me.
TRIDENT INFOSOL has asked me to wait for 3 months.
But I have not that much of time.
What will happen?
What will I do?
Hey gods please help me.
I have become feeble, please do something for me.
He thought more and more, at last his mind advised him to try for any BPO. He went for that and got job without any obstacle due to his talent. He got selected for the post of tech support engineer. He was asked to work in the night shift, from 10pm to 6am. It was good for him. His time in NTL Electronics was from 10 am to 5 pm. So he accepted that. And the new company agreed to give him a salary of 14,000 per month. At that time he thought I have no other option right now, so I will join here temporarily till I will get a call from TRIDENT INFOSOL. In the end he filled all the requirements of the company, and accepted the offer letter from them. At last he got something. He was eager to tell this to Anchal, but was helpless. Cl. Choudhry had become strict with her. He was not allowing her to meet or talk with him.
Still he was happy as he positively came in favor of the challenge. After that his new life started. He was happy. He was doing two jobs in a day. He started to work from 10 am to 5 pm. Then again from 10 pm to 6 am. In this fashion life was going on. But actually the routine was very thought-provoking. Within a week of time it did affect not only his regular job but also health. Again he put a negative mark against him in front of his PM.
He inquired Raheel about this. But he easily avoided that. Raheel was trying hard to do well in both of his job. And he had that much talent and power. But we know everybody fall short in some aspect. So this happened with him. In this way 38 days went. There only 22 days had left. Still with all the intricacy, ill health and hard luck he was happy. He was thinking: after 22 days I will get a salary of 32,000. I will show Cl.Chaudhry. I will show him what I did!
I will make anchal happy. And then she will be mine.
He was trying to give more and more focus on both of his job. He was trying to get his boss’s full belief on him. Count down had been started for him. Good days were coming for him. Only six days were left.
It was an overcast morning. Raheel entered in his company, went to his cabin and logged on his system. He started to do his balance work. Suddenly his GM called him to his cabin. So he went inside his room.
May I come in sir?
Ya raheel come in.
Good morning sir.
Ya good morning.
Sit
Thank you sir.
Hmmm. Mr. Pattnaik what has cropped upwith you?
I listened that you are not focusing fully in your work.
No sir, not like that.
I had some health problem. That’s why.
Is that Health problem or anything else?
No sir, nothing else.
Mr. pattnaik If you will work in two companies at a time, in a day then health problem will occur surely.
Sir!!!!!!!!
Ya Mr.pattnaik Company have known about you.
I had thought you a genuine and trustworthy guy. Your performance was awe-inspiring except last two months. And one thing in this month you could get the elite employ award. You had a bright future with this company. But you only tumbled down all in your hands.
So with a heavy heart I am saying that you are axed raheel, you are axed from our company.
This is your dismiss letter. Go to the account section, and take your payable amount and get out from the company.
Thanks and best of luck for the rest of life.
Sir please heed to me.
You can go now; I have lots of work to do.
Please sir listens to me once.
I will spell out you all about this.
It is too tardy raheel.
I don’t have anything in my hand. This decision from the upper level.
So don’t envisage anything from me.
Goodbye.
Ooook sir. Thank youuu………….
Then without telling a word he came out from that place. The outside world looked like a hell to him. He couldn’t believe the happenings. He was thinking only. Lots of questions were playing inside his mind.Quivering attracted him, till he reached at home. He went to the terrace and sat there. Then with a heavy hearted mind he dragged a cigarette and by lighting that started to smoke. In the mean while anchal came from home. He was looking for raheel. Suddenly her eyes fell on him. Without thinking she just came to him. When she saw him smoking she came to knew that something wrong has happened. He could not anticipate the situation. He could not believe her eyes. She had not seen him for last two months closely. He was looking like a poverty-stricken fellow. As well as with a heavy hearted mind. Then she asked:
What happened raheel?
What made you to smoke at this time?
Raheel did not utter a single world.
He just came closely towards her and did hug her and started sobbing.
And this thing was very much different for anchal.
Raheel what happened? Tell me naaa……..
Finally he told her the entire story about his two jobs, what problem he faced and how his boss fired him.
Anchal I did fail.
I lost my job.
I was very happy. I was thinking that after six days I will get a salary of 32,000 thousand and will show that to your papa. And will prove myself.
Then after that nobody can part us.
Butt………….
I failed dear.
I think I will lose you dear.
I can’t live without you anchal! I can’t.
But I am a useless.
I could not keep my word.
Please forgive me anchal. Believe me I am not a looser but the luck did not give any support.
What would I do?
Nooo raheel don’t say like this.
Every time you were saying me to be practical always. But now you are doing against that.
Please don’t think like this.
It’s the luck. So we have to accept that.
I know you raheel. I know what you can do.
So my Cuddle Cakes is not an useless. One day he will be a bright spark.
And I know what you can do for me.
So you will not fail ever.
You have done some out of the ordinary things for me.
And this is a dream for everyone except you.
Even I can bet that no one can do things for love like you.
You are marvelous.
So leave these things, and lets go somewhere for refreshing. Shall we go for a drive in greater Noida express highway? Or go to paranthe wali gali to taste your favorite paranthe.
Tell me Naaa…….. Where we will go?
I want to refresh your mind.
Or we can go to India gate for a cool breeze.
Don’t think much my cute boy, everything will be fine.
So let’s go to somewhere, after that I will talk with papa about this.
Then she took raheel to greaternoida express high way to relax his mind.
Then after assuring raheel she came to home, and called her father and said:
Papa I want to talk with you.
Ok tell me.
Papa something wrong has happened.
Raheel’s company fired him from his job.
Whaaattt!
Ya papa.
I had known that. He deserved that. I was telling you he is not a guy for you.
But you did not listen. Now see what happened.
No papa thing is not like that, first listen to me.
Don’t favor him anchal.
Papa!
For the sake of the promise to you, he tried hard to get much salary. But he did fail everywhere. To satisfy you and for me, at last he did decide to work in a Bpo in night shift. He started to work at NTL in day time and in the Bpo in night. And you know papa this is very hard, but he did that. And this is for me only. Still things were going in the right way and smoothly. But papa, the luck did not help him. NTL electronics knew about his doings and without listening anything they fired him.
So tell papa, what was his fault? Had not he tried? Had not he worked hard? Without thinking about himself he did something extra ordinary for me only.
So he is really extra special. So accept him papa. Accept him for me please. I can live happily with him.
I do not need money papa; I want raheel and his love. So please understand papa, please.
Anchal! I have big dreams for you. And those things cannot be fulfilled with him. He is just an useless.
You are thinking wrong papa! He is not like this. And one thing put your all efforts and all the money you have, but you cannot get a guy like Raheel.
Anchal!!!!
Ya papa I am right.
Papa! I know you don’t like him. So you are doing and playing ridiculously with some promises with him. And that poor fellow is following those. He admires you a lot papa. That is why he is doing all the stuffs.
Now listen one thing carefully papa! If I won’t get raheel then I won’t keep myself alive.
Anchal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is he greater than your parents?
Is he more than us for you?
Not like that papa.
Then…………….
Papa, I know how much you love me, but his love is precious in his way.
Still my decision is final, just stay away from him.
Sooory papa.
AAAAAAAnchal!!!!!!!!!!
Papa, keep a side your esteem and just see the happiness of your daughter, then you will know what is right.
Papa I know you want to keep your daughter away from him, as he is earning low, he is not a career 1st class student, not an IITIAN. So you had planned those promises. You had thought that he can’t fulfill your requirement. But he somehow did that.You were almost right papa, but not fully. Remember one thing this is impossible for everyone except Raheel.
Just the luck did not support him.
But you have cheated raheel.
So I won’t obey your orders.
Ohhh… my daughter has grown-up.
She has more knowledge than me.
I used to teach her by holding her hands. But today she is teaching and arguing with me.
Really the insect of love makes the children crazy.
For that ridiculous thing only they don’t even think about their parents.
Is love bigger than parents?
Can somebody love you more than your mother?
Can somebody take care of you more than your father?
No papa no one can!
But love sometimes makes you feel that everything is smaller than it. No one is around you except your love. And another thing papa when you have to move towards your destination then you have to choose the right path by leaving all the other things. In that way you have to forget all stuffs.
First I did not want to do like this, but now I have to. Otherwise the word love will lose its eminence papa!
I love you and mama much. But papa, raheel’s love for me is exceptional. I am sorry papa it may not be tolerable for you. Still in my view I am right papa. You have cheated and mocked my love. So this is the time to give my love fully respect and honor.
I don’t know papa why did you do like this.
It was your thinking. And maybe you are right, maybe I am wrong.
Still I will go with my love.
Anchal’s each word did thrill Cl. Chaudhry. Some panic made a nest in him. So he asked his wife to keep eye on anchal. But all we know no one can stop somebody who is seriously in love. The thing love can make you climb thousands of Everest. At last Anchal thought a lot for two days. Then she did decide to go to Raheel. It was a cool rainy night, she called him and said:
Raheel I want to meet you. I am coming upstairs.
What! Are you nuts!
No I am crazy, crazy for you.
We will meet tomorrow dear.
No I want to meet you now.
I am coming.
Then abruptly she cut the call and came to upstairs.
Raheel became astonished.
What happened anchal? What made you to come here so late?
Anything wrong? Is everything alright?
She ran towards raheel and hugged him tightly.
And said:
stop questioning you fool.
Let me with you for some time.
Ok.
But what about your father?
Do not think about him, he is sleeping right now.
I had a quarreled with him day before yesterday.
I tried hard to make understand him. But he did not listen. He asked me to stop thinking about you again.
But I came without listening to him to meet you.
I want you raheel, so I disobeyed him.
But anchal!!!!
Stop thinking about him raheel. Why do you think about everyone except you always?
I have to say one thing to you.
What?
I want to be yours forever tonight.
Whhhhaaaaat!!!!!!!!!
Ya, please accept me dear.
Are you zany? Do you have any knowledge about your saying?
Ya completely, my sweet boy.
I am not a child. I am not taking baby food in my breakfast. I am a lass. I am 21 years old and you are almost 24. And I think you are perfect in every aspect. Don’t you? Similarly I am also perfect with no limitations. And last but not the least thing is the government of India requires this much things only from a boy and girl to be a couple. Is not it?
I have this much knowledge only.
Raheel started to laugh at anchal’s words.
Then said: ya my cutie pie this is not only ok. This is alright.
Sooo….
Sooooooo………………
Then he strongly hugged her and hauled her velvety lips towards him with his lips. The lips locked like two opposite pole magnets first. Then those things gone into war. They did share the romantic saliva with each other. At that time raheel was resting on a wall and anchal was on him. In the meantime situation became wild. They rested in the bed. They had become crazy, crazy for each other, and crazy for love. They were in cloud nine and enjoying the sudden excitement and turn in the life. They might be in a stage of utopia.in the very moment anchal lifted her lips and rubbed against raheel’s chin. It made them look into each other’s eyes. Again their saliva of mouth coalesced and the tongues set forth for a pleasure duel.. They were too busy with each other still were speechless.
The knives of passion sliced their senses into lot of pieces. Suddenly raheel’s hand started exploring anchal’s body. In this fashion they opened all their private desires in that moment. Suddenly there occurred a sudden silence and they could hear them breathe heavily. After that raheel sat in the bed and anchal was in his lap. He was playing with her silky hairs. In that very moment he uttered:
Anchal we might have done something wrong.
You fool don’t think like that, and don’t behave like a child.
And another thing have not you ever thought for this?
So leave this.
Anchal can’t we be together?
Yaaaa we became naa, just a little while ago.
Be serious anchal.
I want to marry you, want to love you forever.
Yaaa I also want that.
All the things were going in our favor, but my bad luck washed all the things. F$$k my luck and f$$k me.
Don’t say like this raheel.
The luck plays a vital role in our life. It is an unknown and unpredictable phenomenon that causes an event to result in a way rather than other. So we have to accept this.
Yes I know that, but I have accepted that everytime.
But we can’t to against it naaa.
So my cute boy don’t think more, everything will be alright.
I want to marry you, and if this will happen then there is no one be happy more than me. But keep in your mind one thing: “marriage is not everything. It is a legal contract between two people. It is a process of mixing two people, culturally,legaly and sexually. We can marry legally with out my parent’s permission, but I know you won’t do that.
And raheel remember one thing always, whatever it will be in future, I am yours. Anchal is forever for you. Her every beat is for you. If something wrong will happen with me, then won’t think about me a lot. You have to concentrate in your life and work. I want you to go higher and higher. For me you have suffered much. So by leaving all the past things you will go on. For me you have became careless about your future.
Anchal…… stop.
What has happened with you? Why are you telling like this? Nothing will happen to you. I am with you. So don’t try to be a philosopher. Come and sleep.
Hmmmm……..
Then they went to sleep. But there was not a single sleep in anchal’s eye. She thought a lot about raheel, about their future, their love and last but not the least her parents.
It seemed her that they will fail in the commitement of love. A fear loosing each other hitted her inner part. Her father is not in a mood to listen her desire. Then she started to think about her future.
Papa will definitely send me abroad for higher study. He will force me with lots of emotion. But I can’t go by leaving raheel.
In the other hand I can’t break papa’s heart. Now I have come to the middle of a road. The veichles are coming towards me with a high speed. So I cant go straight. I have to go either side of the road. Two people are waiting for me in either side, papa and raheel. Towards whom I will go to save me from the coming catastrophe? I can’t leave raheel, in the same time I can’t deny papa’s call. Though I had some quarreled with papa, still he is my papa. He is the one who has brought me to this mortal world, has given me all my wantings. If I will refuse him then it will be a heart throb for him. On the other hand I cant even leave raheel. He is the one who has left his own life, career and everything for me only. Ohhh god what will I do. I cant go to the either sides of the road so will I go straight………….
Anchal was in a circle of puzzle. She came out from raheel’s room and went outside her house. It was around 3.30pm. She was thinking about her direction and suddenly a sound did stimulate
Dhruuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm……………………….
Some taxi driver said that the girl was walking in the middle of the road. We were about to drag her from the place a black Honda city smashed her beautiful body into small pieces.
After that Cl. Chaudhry was informed about the accident, as one of his friend some how managed to identify anchal. He and his wife hurriedly came to the place and saw the body of their loving daughter. Anchal’s mother brust into grief. But Cl.Chaudhry was standing like a statue. The posture he might had learn from the army training. Raheel got the news and without wasting a second came to the place. He did fall beside the body. He could not belive that was anchal.he did become dumb. He was quivering like a leaf in the wind. He brust into tears, yelled, but no one consoled him, no one did listen to him. In the mean time police came and investigated the heartbreaking incident. They took the body for the process of postmortem. They named it as an accident due to the idiocy of the victim. Still that time Cl.Chaudhry was in the same state of affirs. Raheel could not keep himself silent. He went to Cl.Chaudhry and uttered:
Sir, they named it as accident due to inanity of anchal.
But you know how clever your daughter was!!!
So is this true????
I think it is a suicide and someone might had forced her to do so……
But one thing I am admiring you sir!
You are very strong. You did not even bow infront of your daughter’s body.
You did not even shake by the dismissal of your daughter.
The Army might have taught you these things. Really you are the proud of army.
Thank you.
Then with a heavy heart raheel came to his home. He had become like a stone. He sat on the bed. Something touched his hand. He did discover that. At that was a white paper. He came to know that was a letter and written by his love and life Anchal. He did start to read…..
Heeeyyyy my curdle cakes, my sweet boy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I don’t know how you can read this. My papa once had told me that beta, we are the dolls of the almighty who directs us to play by his wishes in the stage of this fantasy world. Raheel, you are such an amazing guy. You are the most decent guy I have ever seen. You are the night dream for every other girl, and I was so lucky to have you. You know sometimes things doesn’t happen in our favor. The memory is still fresh in my mind, when we had seen each other for the first time. I was enjoying the evening with some children. You were returning to home from office. For the first time our eyes did match. Truly speaking I don’t know what was that, something passed through my heart. You gave me a slight smile. And you know I am crazy about your smile till this date. Gradually we became closer. And that sensation turned into love in some days with out my core knowledge. I had another incident as fresh, and that was when you did propose me. I was in my hall watching tv, you came and asked mamma about the score of tendulkar. And when she went inside suddenly you came to me with a handmade flower from the vase and proposed me. How romantic that was. I had not thought about the way of proposing in my wildest dream. How cute, how romantic that was!!!! That was beyond my imagination. Salute to your thinking and salute to your guts man!!! And another incident near the india gate. We were in our first outing. We were sitting in the bench in the park with a slight distance. We talked a lot. I was smiling at your cute sayings suddenly you brought your lips closer to mine and did plant a thunder kiss. What was that? Some hurricane did flow through my body.
My cute boy I had tried hard to make understand papa. But he did not listen. After failing from his side I did decide to meet you. I spent a lot of time with you yesterday night. Believe me dear I couldn’t figure out our future. Nobody were in favor of us, neither my parents nor your luck. We came closer last night for the first time. When we got closer you rendered me breathless. Our fingers interwined and your lips did press against mine. Everything about you took my breath away. Then you did something more,by which my mind went blank and as a computer reboots , it did start to dawn on me that some thing wonderful was happening. The intensity of the moment made us insane. We went blind. Our lips, tongues, hands and much more things went to war. I can’t explain more than this. After that you went to sleep. You were looking very innocent like a cute baby. I needed more time to spend with you. You don’t know how long I was there just staring you in the bed and in the door way. I wanted to run towards you. But with the last kiss with you I came from home, by passing all the night noise. I thought we can’t be together. Nobody will agree for our relation. Suddenly I thought it will be good to go away from your life.
Raheel you have faced a lot of trouble for me only. You have not thought about yourself,your career for once. With me your life has seen tremendous dilemma.i know raheel you will not accept my sayings. But truth is always truth.i know this letter is the last possible medium for me to talk with you. I have clearly understood that we can not be together. My papa will not accept our relation, and i can not escape from him to make alive my love. Whatever he may be, still he is my father. My misdoing might have ruined his prestige. So at last I did think to go away from your life. Raheel you know one great saying by samuel butler!! “ all animal except man know that the principal business of life is to enjoy it”. We human are really very different. We say that we are the best creation of almighty. But really we are very much down as compare to animals.so my cute boy don’t think much about me. I know when you will read this you will be angry with me. But my heart advised me this only dear. So dear, after this don’t waste your time thinking much about me. Don’t blem anybody for my misdoings. I have taken this decision with my all knowledge. My doing may be force someone to think about the past differently. I may prove my love infront of papa. So, I thought to prove this by my life.
Raheel always keep smiling, and live your life at the fullest. you may think that the stupid girl advising me after doing such bogus thing. But my dear these are request to you. I love you, I will be with you for ever.
Forget me as the darkest chapter of your life. I have given you only pain. Please start your life from a new point and fulfill all the dreams of you and your parents. Raheel don’t be insane by talking I have loved only one girl and I won’t marry anyone else. Just be in a good position and get the best girl as your life partner. Don’t cry for me atall. I will be there with you always.
Anyway love you my cuteboy, my baby.
Yours………..
aNcHaL
raheel became speechless. He could not imagine anchal.he was thinking numerous
things.
Is that the same girl, who was thinking life is bindass. We have to be practical on every aspect. How she did this. How could not I get a single glimpse about her thinking. The girl who was saying everything will be ok oneday, she only did select the path of suicide.
The girl who was scribbling romantic messages on her note book, who was drawing hearts on every possible places, who was praying for my happiness without any reason,only left me in the middle. Anchal’s dismisal made raheel to seem as some of his nerves and cells has been ruined. Was it true!!!! Was I awake!!!! He was thinking only.
At last like every other human being he started to scold the almighty.
Hey God!!!
From the starting of my life I have found that luck is a very peculiar thing. It can be renamed as hide and seek. Some one has said that luck is that, what happens when preparation meets opportunity. But I have prepared fully from my side still not for a single time it has met with opportunity. And another thing it luck has a peculiar habbit of favoring those who don’t depend on it. So I can’t estimate what actually luck is. Hey dude!!!! Can you explain me about this. I am broke dude! I have lost everything. I don’t want to live in your fantasy world.
But…………
I will live. I will live for my anchal. I will keep alive her feelings and love. And one thing to you mr. supreme power!!!! Don’t Try to make this type of luck for someone. if truth be told these things are very sore and ………….
It really aching.
Hey Dude It Was Mind Blowing Yaar.
ReplyDeleteJitna bhi kahoon utna kam he.
Tera har ek shabd dil ko chu leta he yaar.
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ReplyDeletean another thing i hv sent my story to srishti publication. hope i will get some positive sign.